by Brenden Jan 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You looked me in the eyes |
I LOVED it its like how i feel bout me ex hes my first love and he left me once he got wat he wanted :(( so i get where ur comin from |
It's great. The last verse ( or whatever it is called... it's too early in the morning ) is my favorite. It really tells how you truly feel about her. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work yeah? |
by Lady Nik
This is an amazing poem. Great job. Very deep and emotional. Nice work. Shanik |