This poem is amazing, like seriously, it's really good! u r an amazing writer! i can really relate to this... great job!!

*Shawte*

Watch out for the ' in your poems. cause it ends up putting lots of /// in it. so you should edit this.

but apart from reading round that one word this was a great poem!

5/5

David

David

Great poem, the emotion really came across in your writing. Good write keep it up!

Well i think i typed this one out for yah but good poem i like it alot love yah Mandz