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  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    Another great poem i must say u have talent lol
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Loved these lines:
    "An empty tick of a forgotten clock"
    "The universe dies without a sound"

    "Am i resposible for,
    The absent universe"
    you are responsible for the changes you make, not all the changes that happen around you.

    "The dead worlds grew life,
    With the waste of the war"
    :) how interesting! this I need to think more about.

    Loved the ending :D
    be happy!

    take care,
    Marjan