"How can you tell me not to fall in love...
When you exist" God my sentiments exact!!! i wish all girls would think like you :( but an excellet poem 99/5

Awesome poem! love it heaps, great work, keep writtin
___xox

Good job on this poem. xx

This is excellent. I loved it.
Great job!

Wow! that was good...I thoroughly enjoyed that! That was amazing. Great questions you posed. Here are my favorites...

How can you tell the eraser not to erase...
When mistakes exist?

and

How can you tell me not to fall in love...
When you exist...? That's so neat. Nice job!
Charisma*

I agree totally with Charisma.
Those are my favourite stanzas.
"how could I not fall in love when you exist".
I'm looking forward to using those exact words someday to my love.
You're amazing!

Gem, I don't know how you can turn out so much beautiful poetry. Excellent!

Wow powerful..amazing. ths reminds me of my poem Will You Be Mine..which i wrote forevr ago, but i wrote for the man who would be my husband someday, so im giving it to dave when he gets bac k..since he wotn be here for v-day..check it out again amamzi job.

lissa