This was great you captured the story and meaning greatly i luvd it straight away 5/5 for sure

Fantastic ,your an amazing poet

Aww! this is so sweet!, love it its a gorgeous poem!
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Need to work on the flow, but the imagery is good. Sad and heartfelt love poem.

David I think this poem is really good. You can feel the emotion. I know what it feels like to love one this much. I really enjoyed reading your work. Take Care Cindy

Hey i this poem is so beautiful! i read it and wanted there to be more! u expressed urself really well. *thanks for the awesome comments on mine. well i think im gunna read sumore of urs now. nice work!

This is so sweet...
You are good at expressing yourself through words...beautifully written.

This is a really good poem, love is so special and there really is nothing better. i'm glad you found it. great poem 5/5

Excellent