by David Jan 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Dear lover |
Excellent work...lovely choice of words...perfect rhyming and great flow too...so touching and well written!..kp it up! |
OMG, now this is my favorite, i love how everything just fits, and your ryhming, it was perfect and wast forced at all, great job, 5/5 |
OMG, now this is my favorite, i love how everything just fits, and your ryhming, it was perfect and wast forced at all, great job, 5/5 |
by Cella Bella
Aw I loved this poem. It was so heartfelt and flowed ever so nicely.I want it to be a song & for someone to sing it to me lol. Beautiful write! 5/5 |
by Kalee
This is a really sweet poem David. |