Comments : Picture In A Frame (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is really good!
    it has a secret meaning in the poem...
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Oi, hallo, howdy cowboy.

    hi, sorry to only start commenting now, ive been busy, busy, busy and guess what BUSY!

    uni is no joke, haha,

    no, i really loved this poem, thats propably why you featured! lol,

    Amounting to nothing, but nothing itself.

    thats my fav part! no you really did a great job on this one!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Oh, and your over all rating out of 15 were 14! well done!

    Narc xxx

  • 14 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Wow, excellent! Such a great poem, I'm very impressed.
    You did an amazing job of explaining all the things pictures are to people, physically and emotionally, without actually stating "pictures in a frame" other than in the title. That's work of a true poet ;)

    "there" in the last stanza, 3rd line, should be : they're

    ^ It's important not to mix up their/there/they're... People will take you more seriously.

    Keep up the good work! I could be biased because I adore the cleverness of acrostics, but this is a better one than most.

    Definitely 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow. You have a great talent with words. keep it up. I'm not a huge fan of the style of an acrostic, but i would read yours any day.