Wow this is amazing and so sweet and yet so sad and I feel where you are coming from keep wrinting these great poems 5/5

Cindy, that was just amazing, I mean, so much power and emotion, i could really feel your heart burning away as you wrote this. I just loved it, it mesmorized me into a trance.
well done,
Much Love, Your dear friend Tara-Kay

Wow this is wonderful!!!!! but very sad i can feel the pain ur going thru im sure not as much since u guys were 2gether 4 soooooo long but i no how ur feeling....but great poetry is coming out of it soooo keep writing!!! 5/5 keep up the fantastic work!!

This is so beautiful, it's romantical! 5/5

Lovely poem! Once again, you did an amazing job! I love how you put all your emotions into your poems, cos it is felt by the reader. Such strong emotions! I love it! Take care =)

Cindy, I like your new style of love poems, remembering the happy and loving times with John. Very nicely done.

Uncle John is smiling down on you and your words of love for him. Beautifully penned heartfelt poem. Good job!

Aww. I loved the emotion I felt in this one. You have a way with words and flow. The depth was very well written into this piece. Nicely done! 4.5/5

This is one of my faves from you, and yes although it's in the sad catagory, it would do just as well in the love catagory cos i can the love shared in your words and while it feels like it's at an end now, it isn't cos i know one day, you'll find each other again.
It's just a simple yet difficult game of patience.
5/5 hun
Love Gem xx

Aawwwhh such a sad poem the it ends so well yet so sadly.

This poem flow beautifully, love it, flawless, no mistakes, as always, this is a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Another heartbreaking yet beautifully written piece...you have so much talent...I'm sorry for your pain..
I thought this was excellent, as always.

One day the right guy will come....
A new love will have begun....
Don't give in to hate... just be patient and wait....when he comes you will know...he will not deal in lies, look you deep in the eyes..and say........?

This was so spellbounding i just couldnt stop reading the beautiful words you wrote well done

Emotion-packed and simply wonderful.
You words were chosen perfectly and I could tell how much you deeply miss this person.
Sometimes we feel it's too hard to go on in life without the person we depended on the most not here with us. Certainly not the best feeling in the world.
This was a fantastic poem, hun! =] Keep it up. 5/5

Stay Strong!
Stephanie

This is such a beautiful poem. The beginning sounded so hopeful, but the ending brought everything to such a tragic end. wonderuflly written 5/5

Thank u 4 the comment...i really liked ur poem

That is so sad. =[ I'm terribly sorry for your loss. This is such a great poem though, showing how you feel. It flows and rhymes so well, so naturally. You're very talented. Best wishes.

Tammie

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not intended for you?????
Apologies!
Cindy.....excellent poem you can't rate this cos the site doesn't handle
scores like this.

I relate so so so well to this... please keep writing!