Out of the window

by ~me~   Jan 8, 2007


The vastness surrounds me

illuminating unknown places
unknown things

framed by the car window

divided by electric wires

contaminated with thoughts and consciousness

but still escaping capture

outside humans hands grasp

mearly speckled with reminders

that there is consciousness in the world

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  • 17 years ago

    by Angela

    Amazing style!!
    you seriously write beautifully in all the poems of yours that ive read.. this is one of my favorites.. it really captures human life
    good job
    7/5 lol

    <3 ang

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write , nice to see someone still staying simple with there work ,nice flow ,good wording ,all in all very nice poem ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    Hey, i like it thea its really diferent... keep writing your poems are lush xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Looking out the window the world seems small, and perhaps from space it is, but it is so vast its hard to take it all in and one can only hope to in one lifetime tho thats not enought :) a beautifull poem i love it :)) glad to see a new one from you :))

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