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I think any poem that makes one feel, and think is a good poem, and this conjures up many feelings for me.. well done

I think any poem that makes one feel, and think is a good poem, and this conjures up many feelings for me.. well done

The concept and the imagery on first stanza, the way it was written was capitvating, the idea to fly from a suffocating reality. The ending was a lift to the sorrow felt, a resolution, to find peace, it illuminates the prospect of it being possible to break free. Well Done.

Naerwen

Hey i reALLY like this poem as well. um, i hope u dont think i was upset im glad u like my poem and dont think it needs rewording but i honestly do a[ppreciate constructive critisim i want to make my work as good as it can be. also i don't think its good 4 ur teacher to draw on ur painting!!!:)

This poem is amazing, it has a lot of emotion in it. keep the great work up =D

-chelseaa;

ps. thanks for the sweet comment