by PoetryHeart Jan 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The little girl was happy |
by Gem
The flow was a bit stilted at times but the sheer emotion and power of the words carried it through. |
by TaNyabAbEE
WOW! this is really good. it's so sad. i love it. it tells such a sad story. (and thanks for the comment, i really appreciate it!! you're on my favorites too!!) |
I love it hunn you are an amazing writer keep it up |
by Espoirfailed
This is really moving and sad the description of the mothers death literally moved me, such a sad haunting story. well done |
by PoetryHeart
Well what do you think? constructive critisism and helpful comments welcome. i could use all the help i can get |