by Rachel RTVW Jan 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Bridges are burned and then they fall, |
by Fluffy
"Bridges for him, were built and then burned, |
Another aspect on the terrible things that we as the abused feel. This was an awesome write with such emotion, I cried all over again. I have just come to grips with reality over the abuse I suffered when little. My secret was never told until recently. I am 36 and held it in too long. The revenge I sought was through prayer that God would do justice that would never be done earthly. He fulfilled my prayers with a long suffering slow death experience by my abuser. This is such a sore subject with me. I was finally able to write a poem of the same nature and when I did it relieved so much from me. You have done an excellent job with the telling of an actual story. I know that justice will never be served because the damage done can never be reversed. |
Aww. that was so sad, im so glad the girls spoke out, theres nothing worse than keeping something like that to yourself. |
COMMENT # 3 |
by Kaila
Wow this is excellent so far best poem ive ever read keep it up! i wish i could give it a 10/5 but i guess 5 will have to do!!! |