A tragic story that must be told, repeatedly.....Very well-delivered.........

(for your consideration:...While Most of the commas are well-placed, there are a few too many interrupting the flow unnecessarily in this terrific piece.........Peace.)

Oh wow this poem was a great way to express how you feel and you did it a great job of it well done xox

In this life you can do what you like but you get away with nothing......

Great write and very sad. hope he gets hammered people who prey on the weak sicken me

Damn very good but sad and wow but great poem you got good skill

Oh my god, this is breathtaking. The story is very depressing, but extremely well told. You hear things like this, poems about rape and such...but the word choice and truth brings everything together here. Wonderful write, and I hope with all that I am, this man suffers for the rest of his pitiful days. I hope the poor girls will heal as well as ones abused so cruelly can. My blessings are with them. Beautifully written, the emotion is impressive. 5/5

Wow this is excellent so far best poem ive ever read keep it up! i wish i could give it a 10/5 but i guess 5 will have to do!!!
Loved it *kaila*

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another spectacular one.. the emotion is good but not great .. the flow however is flawless once again.. its a very sad story and i hope that jerk does get the maximum sentence

Aww. that was so sad, im so glad the girls spoke out, theres nothing worse than keeping something like that to yourself.

much love and many kisses,
bex

Another aspect on the terrible things that we as the abused feel. This was an awesome write with such emotion, I cried all over again. I have just come to grips with reality over the abuse I suffered when little. My secret was never told until recently. I am 36 and held it in too long. The revenge I sought was through prayer that God would do justice that would never be done earthly. He fulfilled my prayers with a long suffering slow death experience by my abuser. This is such a sore subject with me. I was finally able to write a poem of the same nature and when I did it relieved so much from me. You have done an excellent job with the telling of an actual story. I know that justice will never be served because the damage done can never be reversed.
Dixie

"Bridges for him, were built and then burned,
A court and God, will give what he's earned.
I say to this man to have some repentance,
And I ask of the judge, maximum sentence."

^A brilliantly structured piece. The rhyme and flow are equally consistent and the unveiling story is truly breathtaking. Well done :).