by Bill Turner Jan 8, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Death lay sprawled at my feet, blood beneath my boot |
by hani
Very nice and beautiful |
by Deana
This made you feel like you were watching an old western movie,very entertaining the rhyming was perfect. excelent. |
This is darkly entertaining, and I particularly liked the line "Alone in a crowded room" as I've used the very same phrase in a poem of my own some time ago. Very different subject matter though. |
In short ... simply awesum !!! |
WOW this is by far the best poem i have read all day, this was amazing. I loved the imagery and detail you used. Every word fit together perfectly and I was blown away by the entire thing. I particularily loved this line: |