WOW THAT WAS TOUCHING! i have been through heart ache, but u have been through soooo much more, experiences really make a good poet, and u sure are one! keep writing even if the road is bumby, keep your eyes open to new roads of success and just live with your head up high to extungish all problems and fears and live for those moments that shine in your life, "every 60 seconds you cry is a minute of happiness you can never get back", you really touched me just wanted you to know that, you are one of my favorites now, thank you :)
-say goodbye and go

We-ow. That's beautiful. I loved it. =)
5/5 Thank's for the comment.

Wow, That was very powerful. This Line: 'have you ever thought about your past,
and just wished it wasn't real?'
I could totally reality to.
I know what it's like to have someone treat you so terribly & just want to know why they did it. Among other things...
I look at my past & it's like Damn...that was a long nightmare...
I'm sorry you've went through so much, but babe, what doesn't kill us only makes us stronger. & I know you're strong. So don't give up. Keep fighting. I love you so much, Babe.
Love,
Your Baby

Long...but hard to leave in between, full of simple questions but so deep as i guess we all these things in our life and turn to clay while searching for answers.

great write dear...keep them coming

all the best and take care

I can feel the pain in this poem..... I may not have experienced all of those things... but have enough experience to say I know this pain

OMFG !!!!!! That poem was soooooooo touching. I Love it. im so sorry u went through all this. Keep your head up high, move forward and dont look back. keep up the good work... no great work. you are an awesome poet. and you really touched me. Thank you(^_^) (message me anytime)

Well, I already comented on this one, but I missed some spelling errors.
So I thought I'd check them for you now. :]

"do [you] know how hard it is,
for me to face another day?
if you don't then tell me why,
you treat me this way?
have [you] ever felt the pain i have,
do you know how i feel?
have [you] ever thought about your past,
and just wished it wasn't real?"

There you go, babydoll.
I don't mine being your personal spell checker. ;]
I love you, babeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Take care of yourself, Natzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Love,
Shorteeeeeeeeeeeee;;; Your Babyyyyyyyy.

I just can't ever the strong emotions this poem evoked... so sad:(