Comment # 2 (o yeah and its okay that you dont have 12 poems because we can comment the same poem twice since we're two differnet people so you will still be recieving your 12 comments)

wow.. this poem is soo short but still the emotion is there and the word choice is wonderful.. the flow is flawless .. REALLY WONDERFUL JOB!

You have an ability I hjave NO TRACE OF.... you are able to cram so many emotions and images into such a short peom.

ABUSE THIS TALENT.

Short and sweet, powerful.

Ending is so effective, you mixed great descriptions with beautifully expressed emotions and it is really fantastic. I love it, very deep and you created truly captivating atmosphere in this short but powerful piece.