Violins Mourn For The Dead

by My Decadent   Jan 9, 2007


Violins mourn for the dead
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At night when angels are asleep and demons rise
The moon once bright is now stained by your demise
As up in Heaven graceful violins melodies they weep
And at night demons arise when angels are asleep.
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For violins mourn the dead
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Stars shimmer like diamonds on the black velvet sky
And demons fold their decaying wings around thy
Restful body as your souless eyes still glimmer -
On the black velvet sky stars like diamonds shimmer.
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Violins mourn for the dead

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Oh wow, WOW!!! Repetition is so effective and you created some special tone in this powerful piece. It is so deep and captivating. I am impressed with your words and imagery is mixed with greatly atmosphere, it is just so beautiful. Well done! Very creative and unique poem, it deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Comment # 3

    AHH!! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM!!! its soo amazing.. like woah.. really really great job! .. the last line well not the last line.. the last line in the last stanza not the random one by its self.. lol is JUST WOAH!! amazing.. perfect.. the flow is this poem is flawless and the structure is unique.. truely amazing write

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful work! I love the title and enjoy how you used repitition of that line throughout the entire piece. The only thing I would say is that the two stanzas almost seem irrelevant to each other yet they still have this strong comparison and connection to each other. 5/5!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    We-oww! I'm loving this. For seriously, Nicely done. Violins rock. 5/5

    Thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamsin

    Hey wow this was amazing I loved it. However just you spelt violins wrong at the beginning -no offense! it says viloins...

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