Hey wow this was amazing I loved it. However just you spelt violins wrong at the beginning -no offense! it says viloins...

We-oww! I'm loving this. For seriously, Nicely done. Violins rock. 5/5

Thanks for the comment.

Beautiful work! I love the title and enjoy how you used repitition of that line throughout the entire piece. The only thing I would say is that the two stanzas almost seem irrelevant to each other yet they still have this strong comparison and connection to each other. 5/5!

~jas~

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AHH!! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM!!! its soo amazing.. like woah.. really really great job! .. the last line well not the last line.. the last line in the last stanza not the random one by its self.. lol is JUST WOAH!! amazing.. perfect.. the flow is this poem is flawless and the structure is unique.. truely amazing write

Oh wow, WOW!!! Repetition is so effective and you created some special tone in this powerful piece. It is so deep and captivating. I am impressed with your words and imagery is mixed with greatly atmosphere, it is just so beautiful. Well done! Very creative and unique poem, it deserves 5/5