Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem, and dont worry im not offended at all im grateful for advice but i was wondering if you could mayb give me an idea of how i could re-word it because i cant think of any other way to write it. tnx. also i like your writing it is really good and not like most other poems i have read keep up the good work.

I really loved this poem. You have a lot of talent and this piece was amazing. I only hope you don't really feel this way, keep it up. 5/5.

This poem is written greatly, you have a great talent.I wonder where you were hidding all this time,lol. love to see more of your works

Wow you are really good and thank you for the comment i can relate to your work you should check some of my other work out we could relate to each others poems

Hey I really liked this. Very descriptive, emotional and flowed well. My fav stanza was:
I created my life prison
My choices shaped the glass
Bars and shackles
Limits, confines
I can never pass...

Thanx for your comment too :D

This is amazing, it definetly means something to me.