I really liek this one, 5/5 =) it really shows what you are tryin to say and how one picture (picture frame) has alot of meaning!

Awwww. Omg that was soooo beautiful! One of the best poems I've read. Really a wonderful write! God bless 5/5
Keep writing.

~Tay

Bryan,
I do not know alot about the diffrent kinds of poetry. I do know a Arcostic, is one of the harder to acomplish. You seem to have done a great job! I love the way it reads.

At first glance it looks funny (no disrespect) but the wording and flow just click in this poem it was really...it may also be that i relate but anyways its a great poem

Bryan, what a poem!!! One of the best I've read in awhile. I know how that feels... like my newest poem.. (My Chaotic Bliss) I love acrostics and you did a terrific job on this one. I'm gonna miss ya in the club... you're still on my favorite list though, so that's good! =] Hope to catch ya around...

*`Ciao

Fabulous job! I loved how you wrote this poem! You did such a great job with this acrostic. Usually, the acrostic poems I've read don't have that flow like this poem. Very well-written. I loved these two lines the most, perhaps cos I can relate:

"Remnants of this broken heart, they will last an eternity,
Every time my eyes meet yours, I know you don't love me."

Well, some thing I'd like to point out:

"More that I realize this, the *more more* (more and more) I feel the same,"

Well that's it.
Overall, very well done! I loved it!
5/5

I loved it, it was so special and heartfelt! really a great poem, beautifully written great job!

Wow. I really liked this acrostic. I don't usually like them, since I find them boring and dull.

[Insanity is all that remains here, just wishing it would end,
Not knowing where to start, not knowing where to begin.]
^^'End' and 'Begin' do not rhyme. They broke the whole rhymes scheme and that threw me off there.

Your flow throughout the whole poem was a little rocky. It seemed forced. Don't try to write a poem just to make it rhyme. It has to be flowing with emotion as well as a good format. Good job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This was beautiful...one of my favourites of your's.
I thought the imagery used was great as was the flw and rhyme scheme.

Lovely in many ways! 5/5

Oh my gosh im soo jelous.. this poem is amazing.. is it for a contest because i entered tooo.. but you soo gonna win.. holy crap.. but im not gonna be a sore sport beacuse i do have some suggestions

in this part of the poem
"Insanity is all that remains here, just wishing it would end,
Not knowing where to start, not knowing where to begin.

A picture in a frame, are all that I have left of those days"

it doesnt flow well.. maybe you could try

"Insanity is all that remains , just wishing it would end,
Not knowing where i should start, or where to begin."
and try
"A picture in a frame, is all I have left of those days"

lastly you have a typo
"Reality starts to kicks in"
i think it should be "reality starts to KICK in"? but i could be wrong

Aww =[ this is so sad! but very good. it has alot of meaning behind it..ur a good writer..keep writing. 5/5

Wow great poem!!
I've never wrote an acrostic, or really read any to be honest but after reading yours i think ill give it a go =D
5/5

This style of writing is so cool! Thanks for the comment on my poem.. I did put and in between. On your poem I only found two mistakes:

Unable to go on with my life, knowing you wont be there. -won't*-

All the pain I've been through, theres no more goodbyes. -there's*-

You did an amazing job on this. It was a beautiful poem. Your rhyming was great, and the flow was amazing!

Excellent Job Babe

5/5

Nice form. Forms are sometimes difficult to do because you are forced to follow the rules and still have it make sense. You did that here. I like the fact that it was a little longer than some of the others who used only a couple words after the rewuired letters. I think you did a good job. The poem is sad and meaningful and it definetly makes sense. 5/5 for you!

I really like this poem you did a fantastic job. I understand the pain in this poem all to well, the picture in a frame symbolizes so much. Fantastic job 5/5

Okay look just to let you be aware of this you are an awsome poet...... you rally are

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I really like this, I think that its pretty tight and has great imagery. The emotion is very clear

I forgot to say that this style is very interesting, I am glad that you explained acrostic, and I had a second read and looked at the first letters, very cool indeed