Hi, i finally got the time to do all outstanding comments, yay, i like this poem, its so sweet! aww

Narc xxx

I really like this poem. its like hallmark giftcard kinda good! lol :D

Thats so cute! i really loved that poem!! well well done! xox

This is a perfect poem that s written nicely. I luv it great job

I think this a very good poem becca, just capitalize the i's, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!! love your poems, keep it up!!!

Aww.. is this for lee

This is a really sweet poem written from the heart, i'm glad you have somebody who means so much to you, excellent job 5/5 P.S. coffe just isn't the same without cream I hope you always have it to put in. take care xo

Awwwwwwwwwww this is so sweet...i love it.. good job!

Your poems are really good! they're really heartfelt and you have alot of talent, will you please comment on mine?

Sweet dedication with a funny ending!LOL

I loved the first three stanzas in this. The flow was excellent. Remember to always capitalise your 'I's though.

The fourth stanza was going well, but the flow was ruined since it was only three lines, and it kind of made me wonder if it was actually the end, since it didn't really seem like an ending.

Overall though - good write.

The ending kind of confused me, it must be something that i don't get. other than that, i did like this overall.

I think thats a good title. On valentines day, all you can think about is that one person. All you can feel is love. I liked it, to say the least. I'm sure whoever got this letter was pleased.

It was well.you make love actually sound worth while

Passion is real and as long as you feel that way about another than the possibilites are endless. if u get a chance please rate some of my poems

I can really relate to this one, i liked the emotion flowinmg throughout the piece.
And in england 'cos' is an acceptable substitute for 'cause' cos it has a different pronounciation and tone.
5/5
*Gem*

Oh so pretty

This is like the cutest poem i've read in a long time, great job! it made me smile. again, very emotional, but i know exactly how you feel!

Forever*Yours

Another beautiful poem. This was so full of love and very discrptive. I loved the last stanza it really wrapped every thing up.Excellent!

Very nice, just like your other poems. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe