by ♥Sarah♥
BEST POEM I HAVE E-V-E-R READ!!!!!!!!! |
by Alli
Awww...that is a beautiful poem! |
by linderrrxo
That was such a great poem love always linda |
Wow! amazing! |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
MM BEAUTIFUL. I CANT BE MEAN TO THIS ONE. I STARTED READING, SLOWLY JUST RELAXED. IT WAS REALLLLYYY SWEET. AND I HAVENT READ THE WORD SURREAL FOR A WHILE. NICE WORD CHOICE. YOU CAPTURED THE FEELING AND MOMENT PERFECTLY! 5/5. |
by KemistryKia
I loved it, very heart felt |
by Jenni
I find that your writing beats the cliches of so many writers. your writing goes beyond a level of it, it's wonderful. the way you describe everything and the word choice just thrills me! wonderful job dear! 5/5 |
by e LIZ a beth
Kay so i think i've read this poem before and im pretty sure ive commented but im doing it again because it just that amazing!! i freeking love this poem.!! great job. you should send this to hallmark its amazing. or you should put it in a card for lee for v-day. :D great job babesss. |
LAMP |
by Kalee
This is a BEAUTIFUL poem. it really describes what love should feel like to some people. Great poem 5/5 |
by Jenni
I read this poem at the perfect time, seriously. I could not be more happy than I am right now. Great job at this poem, it's so sweet and it captures the idea of young love. 5/5 |