by Spike Jan 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Please make the pain go away, |
Fo this is sad :( |
Very good only one thing..the last sentence of the first stanza, shouldn't it be me..not my |
by missy
Another good poem. the rhymes, flow and sentences makes this poem completely good, keep it up. |
Death is bliss..... but for seeking it we gotta go through a suffering kknown as life....... |