Comments : Lay In Darkness At Last

  • 17 years ago

    by lobotomy patient

    Death is bliss..... but for seeking it we gotta go through a suffering kknown as life.......

  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    Another good poem. the rhymes, flow and sentences makes this poem completely good, keep it up.
    definate 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Very good only one thing..the last sentence of the first stanza, shouldn't it be me..not my

    just askin

    nice job!

  • Fo this is sad :(