I liked this poem cos it had an excellent rhythm that kept it going nicely.
Well done on this!
5/5
*Gem*

Hey great poem... can totally relate to it... feel pathetic at the moment and the poem kind of showed me i aint the only one... luvin ur stuff

This poem has truth to it i loved it i just got my heart broken so i could realte 5/5

This ones my favorite. =] 5/5

That iz a really gwd poem read mine it'z crapp but im only 12 so yea