This is cool
it has a good rhythm even though it doesnt rhyme.
I espeacially like the ending line.

have a fun day or when ever you read this xD lol

- Emma

This is sweet...congrats on nine months =]
hope your well
x

This poem was awesome, really breathtaking, congrats on being with him for 9 months.
keep writing, you are very talented
xxxxx

Gaaah, it was so beautiful. So tastefully done....and a style I don't see very often. I love this poem.