Welcome back :) i love this poem its amazing i hung on every word :)))

Heluva poem, i loved the rythym to it and it touched me in a good way

"
I understand how you now need your time,
i pray for the day when you will be mine.
For now being your friend is just about enough,
i forever hope one day you will be my love."

That ending stanza was the stanza that i really loved. It showed how much love you can have and how long it can last
I love it
5/5
*Gem*

Nice poem kelly! I liked it, I finally got the chance to check it out, since Im at school. Good job girl this is another good one.

Excellent poem ,the flow was good and wording was great all in all you did a wonderful job , great write, love this poem full of life and love , sense of peace ,but you captured my heart with this line and it fits my life to a T, thanks : I have fought a battle all my life,
against love and happiness an endless strife.
I wanted them so badly, i gave everything i had,
but yet i was always left feeling sad.
You are the greatest , thanks your friend Tracy
5/5