Natalie where have u been! its been ages since i read a poem from u. i think i can relate to this poem.. neway good job on it. keep posting!!! hope u had a happy xmas and all the best for the new year xx

Wow i really liked this short cinquain good poem and loved the structure ;) good job. Plz read mine and comment im sure u could relate to them .

Very good job. These structured short forms are hard to pull off....you did it. 5/5. Debbie