In a public toilet shes a mess

by b r i d g e t   Jan 9, 2007


In a public toilet shes a mess
with eyes torn up
and rips down her dress
addicted to the enemy
just another identical hand written script
falling for the bullshit
losing her head...
with scars on her wrists
and failed attempts
she doesnt want to just be a percentage
a percentage of teens who want to die
a percentage of girls he left alone to cry
so shes done with it
shes ripped up the notes
shes torn down the photos
no longer will she be daddies princess
she'll make f**cking sure they miss her
slumped against the cold tired floor
shivering as the wind tore under the door
alcohol haunting her bloodstream
and pills in hand
she just wants to find a way
for u all to understand

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  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Omg..that is really sad and sooo true! i love it 5/5

    xoxo becca

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Ur so good!!! great poems, this one is my fav so far.

  • 17 years ago

    by kida

    This is good, really haunting and not something im likely to forget. i like the last 4 lines 'alcohol haunting her blood stream/and pills in hand/ she just wants to find a way/ for you all to understand' that really pulls it all2gether 4 me. if u caould can u comment on my poem 'don't make my mistakes'? tnx n good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Fay

    Great poem I also liked the lines

    'She just wants to find a way
    for u all to understand'.
    I can relate to it soo much plz read my poems and comment Im sure u could relate to them especially 'Never Good Enough'.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    She just wants to find a way
    for u all to understand

    ^^ Loved those last two lines. It's exactly how I'm feeling atm.

    Very sad poem, but nicely done! Keep it up.

    Natalie``

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