She just wants to find a way
for u all to understand

^^ Loved those last two lines. It's exactly how I'm feeling atm.

Very sad poem, but nicely done! Keep it up.

Natalie``

Great poem I also liked the lines

'She just wants to find a way
for u all to understand'.
I can relate to it soo much plz read my poems and comment Im sure u could relate to them especially 'Never Good Enough'.

This is good, really haunting and not something im likely to forget. i like the last 4 lines 'alcohol haunting her blood stream/and pills in hand/ she just wants to find a way/ for you all to understand' that really pulls it all2gether 4 me. if u caould can u comment on my poem 'don't make my mistakes'? tnx n good poem

Ur so good!!! great poems, this one is my fav so far.

Omg..that is really sad and sooo true! i love it 5/5

xoxo becca