Oh that's sad. Remember there's people out there that care for you deeply. It's a wonderfully written poem though, well done.

This is sad. but some times i feel the same way.5/5. great job!!
(((K3/s3y)))

Omg babe that was so good and i understand it totally u r such a good writer!!!!! i swear and dont ever say u ren't

Tgis poem is ver meaning ful and you portray it real well

the last part made me smile tho
[And for an example of a broken life,
Take a good look at me. ]
becaus eit reminds me of that "take a look at me, a penguin you shall see song"
you prolly weren't intending that, but i liek how such a serious, sad poem can still bring people to smile...or mayb i'm just weird :S

I believe the ending really makes the poem, yours was absolutely great. it ended really well. keep it up hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

Its sad. but very good. i understand it very well.