by Twisted Heart Jan 9, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The Magic of a Kiss |
by Leanne
This was so beautiful I really liked this one. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and imagery and I thought the flow was really good. |
by *Charisma*
It was a very sweet poem but I noticed two spots when reading that through off the flow. They were the last lines in stanzas 2 and 3. Just a little hard to read with the same flow is all. |
by Rachel RTVW
Beautiful. You definetly have a true talent for poetry. Your work is wonderful! |