I love this! Excellent form! The flow was good and the whole thing was absolutely beautiful! I wouldn't change a thing! 100/5 (if I could)

Very beautiful...it's so hard to compete against you. Man, you are good. Wonderful poem Twisted Heart. It's very descriptive.
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Wow!!! this was really good, you did an amazing job with this! I loved the way you ended it, I thought it fitted it perfectly. truely execellent work!