The words you penned seemed to be straight from my mind. Althout I could not have expressed this a wonderfully as you have!! Great flow and write.

Wow, Melissa...it's been awhile since I've read one of your poems. It is quite apparent that you haven't lost your touch. This is flawlessly written.
You have inspired me more than you'd ever know~Holly

This is incredible. It reminds me of a saying I've heard many times as a child. Live is mearly death and the journey. It is the journey that defines our life and the paths we take.

I enjoyed reading this awesome poem. I can't pick a favorite line, because it's all so perfect. Imagery, word choice, flow....flawless. 5/5

Unusual. I'm not sure I understood everything in this piece, but a lot of it was very clear. How true so much of this is. Sounds like a poem about advice mixed in with your own personal problems. It was like thoughts freely flowing from your head in any which way. It was neat and different. Original!
Charisma*