Comments : Standing There

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This was really emotional, the last stanza was very powerful and bold, well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Unless anyone has ever expieranced heartbreak they cant appreciate how much it can hurt - you can feel like you want to die!
    I think you got this message across very well in the poem about how you feel that no one understands but at the same time you feel stupid for letting him hurt you again and again. Guess thats just the way heartbreak goes!

    Kelly
    xx