Comments : I want

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this poem. the ending was really sweet. very well put together. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem is so sweet, I particularly love the line "I need you to be my sunshine, I need you to hold me tight" thats absolutely lovely!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww... cute poem.. i really like this one alot!! enjoyable read!