Twinkle In Your Eye*

by lost in lovee   Jan 9, 2007


Anything...
To be the twinkle in your eye,

Words can't explain all these feelings in my mind,
Actions can't show what I keep inside,

Everything wants to come out,
For you to know the truth,
That I'd give the world...
Just to be with you.

But deep inside are tears of fear,
Fear of... you leaving me forever,

When you really know the truth,
Would you still be there?
Or would you just run away?

If only you really knew the pain,
Going through each day
Only wishing you were mine,
Wishing that I'd be
The twinkle in your eye.

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  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Thank you for commenting my poem...yours are really good too...keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This poem is amazing!!! i love the words, and omg, the emotion!! lol, it's really sweet! great job with this one!!!
    5/5!

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Its so nice...! I loved the last line.
    Brillent poem! Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aww, this was very cute, and sad at the same time. I'm sure everyone knows the feeling of unrequited love, and it's shitty, but your words described the hopes and fears that go along with loving someone very well. great work.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Awww..I liked this poem! I thought it had a lot of emotion and I really like the last two lines. Great job!
    5/5

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