Oh My God. This is SO sad! 5/5

Sad indeed! Oh my! I sure hope no one ever goes through this kind of pain! Anyway, some thing I'd like to point out though:

"Then the bruises he left me *with* started to show."
You should take out "with" so it'll be like:
"Then the bruises he left me started to show."

Overall, a well-written poem!

Omg. this is so frickin sad but i loved it def 5/5!!
*Kelsey*