Hey I really like this poem it's great!!!

I love it. How many time have we wanted to say something like that to someone yet we use our better judgement.
Great!

"To hear lies spattered forth to console me
when those feelings aren't from you"

Really greatly written, 5/5 from me.

I cant relate to this awsome poem

WOW you know this poem is exactly how i feel about my X and I am so glad that he didnt lie. I hope you keep on wrighting cuz you have an Amazing gift!!! Keep It UP!!!

~Kayla~

"I almost want you to say you love me
That I am your only one"

The only thing i can suggest is adding an "and" at the beginning of the second line to clean up the flow a bit, but it stands fine without it too.
Your words, as always, as amazing and you seem to have put a lot of heart into this piece.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

I loved it but I can no longer relate....Jake broke my heart. I guess all boys are the same... Good job though!
xoxo

Hey gr8 poem, I wrote a similar piece a few months back called lie to me.. kinda da same theme but I wos tryin 2 work out if lies are ever justified to make yourself feel better, I too think that the truth is always better. Neway Luvd this piece as I could rel8!!

THIS POEM.. Is just so UH-MAZE-ING! It just really catches me. I've read it so many times.. It's just perfect. I love the title.. and the whole thing.. I can relate to it , as well. Amazing job. Keep it up, Babe.

Bri.x