She's on the edge of discovery

by James   Jan 9, 2007


I saw true beauty
it was there on her face
it was in the way she moved
her style, her grace
it was something she wore
suspended in her hair
it was something she woke up with
it always seemed to be there
it was wrapped all around her
like an eye catching gown
it was there when she smiled
even there when she frowned
it was deep down inside her
in her heart, in her mind
all the way to her toes
that is so hard to find

She almost sees it
she's on the edge of discovery
she's getting so close now
on her way to recovery
I still feel her energy growing
to this day getting stronger
and the way that it's flowing
it won't be much longer
until she finally sees it
that wonderful glow
and when it finally clicks
her person will grow
for now she sits on the edge
it's such an astonishing view
if you could see what I've seen
you'd have fallen for her too

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    I absolutely love this poem. It is so sweet and beautiful that you have made my day. Thanks for being so thoughtful and observant. You make me want to be all that I can be and push my limits!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    I absolutely love this poem. It is so sweet and beautiful that you have made my day. Thanks for being so thoughtful and observant. You make me want to be all that I can be and push my limits!