Comments : Turned To Walk Away

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Neat ending. I liked the part where the waitress overheard you! That was nice. Very full of imagery and thoughts.
    There's a typo in the 4th line. It should be "here" instead of "her". Just thought I'd tell ya.
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    Charisma*