Dear Diary. Part I

by BeautifulxMess   Jan 9, 2007


Dear Diary,
I have a boy to tell you all about.
He is the dream I've waited for.
I think I'm in love without a doubt.
And I don't think I can cry anymore.

Dear Diary,
We walked together hand in hand.
He hugged me tight into his chest.
I never wanted today to ever end.
He told me being with me is the best.

Dear Diary,
I must say that I know I'm in love.
This boy is beyond amazing to say.
I know he's the angel from above.
And the reason I can live everyday.

Dear Diary,
I wish you could see him laugh.
His face brightens up the world.
He truly is the best I'll ever have.
And I'm thankful to be his girl.

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  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    I read this poem... Its excellent! I voted 5/5. Interesting Combo. The mixture of Talking to diary. And I am the diary who you speak to. Telling me your emotions. Head-on. Gorgeous.

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria

    I loved the poem a whole lot but i think that you could do some work with it so it wouldn't be so scattered. but in all i loved the poem becuz it reminded me about my own personal life

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Hi, this is great! the 1st 3 stanzas reminds me of myself! its so sweet, welldone!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    It was good, but as i was reading it it was kind of choppy, like i couldn't get a rhythm to it... the wording could be a little more complicated too, but it was a nice poem, good job

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Aww. A really cool poem about love. And I feel the same way about the way you put these words into. Amazing poem. 5/5

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