Aww. A really cool poem about love. And I feel the same way about the way you put these words into. Amazing poem. 5/5

It was good, but as i was reading it it was kind of choppy, like i couldn't get a rhythm to it... the wording could be a little more complicated too, but it was a nice poem, good job

Hi, this is great! the 1st 3 stanzas reminds me of myself! its so sweet, welldone!

Narc xxx

I loved the poem a whole lot but i think that you could do some work with it so it wouldn't be so scattered. but in all i loved the poem becuz it reminded me about my own personal life

I read this poem... Its excellent! I voted 5/5. Interesting Combo. The mixture of Talking to diary. And I am the diary who you speak to. Telling me your emotions. Head-on. Gorgeous.