Mcfly...well not really, but not terrible. thx tho, about the poem.

Wow, very interesting and artistic. This is one of the few peoms that I've really enjoyed reading lately. You both did a great job with this one.

Wow that is so so good I am inspired.. :P 5/5

I love how you used personification good job i really liked this poem you are now on my favourites ;) keep up the goood work!!

Very deep. Nice ;}

We rock together ;)
Love you honey
Marcus xx

Wow. That was good. The personification is what made me wanna keep reading.

Haha....that was cute and funny....i liked how you used personifications, which made it even more interesting....5/5....great job to both you and your partner