by Ed or Ian Henderson Jan 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Note: This was written as lyrics for a song that never happened, and the last two lines were essentially the chorus. Hence, the extra two lines in the "verse". In case anyone's interested, the music was a blatant rip-off of "Unsung" by Helmet. |
by Gem
I may not fully understand it (which i will admit) but i do understand the powerful message that can be interpreted in the words. |
by Al
This is an interesting poem, good consturction and all, but i guess thats what is expected of a good poet, well thx for the comments...and never force any of my poems out i just write as i feel...kl, peace |