This is an interesting poem, good consturction and all, but i guess thats what is expected of a good poet, well thx for the comments...and never force any of my poems out i just write as i feel...kl, peace

I may not fully understand it (which i will admit) but i do understand the powerful message that can be interpreted in the words.
but then again, i may not and it's just my mind playing tricks =)
I'm going to amuse myself but singing it in different tunes now =P
Excellent work
5/5
*Gem*