I really like this poem because it's from the heart. The flow is good and I love the way you expressed how much you care. excellent job 5/5

I can relate to some parts! I love this poem! You described a friendship and love so well! I thought it was touching! Great work!
5/5

Passsoinate, Caring, Loyal is what this poem brings to mind.
Through yoour words you create a vivid picture of a love that will never die. The only constant in lifeis change and you have expressed this beautifully in this write!

Reading this poem reminded me of me and a close friend of mine, i like to read poems i can relate to and this one i definately could.
another good write :]
5/5

I liked this poem. i thought it was sweet. however, i felt that it was very wordy at this part,

Random hugs when bad moods were inescapable,
You would smile and my tears would disappear,

I felt that you could have condensed it. it was a very sweet poem nontheless.

I voted 5 to bring up your rating a little .. but its not.. its sweet and simple.. the rhymes are okay..some seem forced... but the flow again is just not there for me... however.. it is one of your better from the ones ive read

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Oh,i have known this feeling once but then understood that she is a real b***h,so sorry but got no good memeory about my frineds,so you're so lucky that you have a girl like this,but the poem is really good,keep it up

I loved the last verse, it was so cute, all your work is very sweet and caring. your a really good writer huni

much love and many kisses,
bex