by Reggie Jay Jan 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Weighing in at 200 pounds |
by Mousie
I liked it, and maybe it was just it being late, but it got choppy at times... but other than that, i loved the message it sent, i'm sry, i gave you a 4 but it should be a 5... they really need to have half votes in here! like 4.5... nice job though |
by David
Right from the start you know this is a great poem. the first para sets the fight off. the scene. |
by Bryan
All man, i love this one, i especially like the 4th stanza, |