All man, i love this one, i especially like the 4th stanza,

"A 1-2 punch, like a heavy weight bout
Then the blood of truth spews from your mouth
BANG!!, Life gives you an uppercut to the chin
Then the lies you were told, rise like bruises from within"

it has great flow, a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Right from the start you know this is a great poem. the first para sets the fight off. the scene.

then it goes into describing it. so very well done. i loved it. so different from the rest.

i gave you a 5.

David

I liked it, and maybe it was just it being late, but it got choppy at times... but other than that, i loved the message it sent, i'm sry, i gave you a 4 but it should be a 5... they really need to have half votes in here! like 4.5... nice job though