Mangled*Aly

by Mandz and Aly   Jan 10, 2007


My arms are mangled by my own blade
No matter what I do my scars wont fade
I've tried as hard as I could to make things end
But I guess you just lost your best friend
Life is pointless and full of stress
I'm sorry I got you into this mess
I want to end now and stop the pain
I want to make it dry and stop the rain
My scars just itch and sting and burn
When am i ever gonna learn
My life was a waste and i was meant to go
But I want to be here I just cant say no
I've learned a lesson believe it or not
Had i learned it earlier i would not be in this spot
i messed up and its my time to fly
I just wanted to tell you all i love you and good-bye

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that is really really good keep your work up. i hope its not about you though:(
    5/5 as always

    xx.chelsea.xx

    ps. it might have been to your poem i totally forget which one it was. but it said " if you ever need someone to talk to you can go ahead and comment me and i can give you my e-mail " comment me back

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Cute poem.. sad but still a good write.. the only thing i didnt like was the ending.. it wasnt bad at all just a little cliche..

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sad and full of emotion. I hope it is not inspired by your own real life events. Keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Again another great poem, so much emotion put into your poems and even though they are sad they are great to read!
    Keep up the good work i'll be reading a lot more of your poems :]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. You have some amazing talent! 5/5 from me. And I loved how you rhymed it! And how you put it together so well! Great Job!

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